Thats another lovely poem .Very sweet and heartwarming .

best wishes
chavii.

Awww so sweet! i like the line where you put "let my hair be your secret place to hide"...

Hi Nitin,

so cute.... short yet it had so much to say... wonderful job..
keep writing...

Much Love,
Ipsita

Hi Nitin
again this was superb as all other poems of urs. its so sweet. u always write so differently. 5/5
great job dear!!!!!!!!

Bharti

That is so sweet. *5/5*

Haha heyy.. another fantastic poem. I love it. Its short yet says so much.:) Brilliant, lol.
xoxo Monique
P.S. I WILL vote this time, haha.
5/5

Omg i love this one it's one of my faves from you definet 5/5 keep up teh good work xox

"if to be with you is a dream
i will sleep forever
till i go high...so high!
die"

Amazing lines!!! I love it. Reading your poems is becoming my new hobby now. LoL... And I'm enjoying each and every single piece of them. Great Work. 5/5

Wow! Nitin
A happy love poem. Excellent job! It makes me so happy to see you happy :)

Take care Love Cindy

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3