Why Don't I Die?

by LovelyDivine   Jan 14, 2006


What's going on?
No one seems to care about me.
Doesn't anyone see me?
Am I invisible?
I don't see why I am here.
Why don't I just slit my wrists and die?
No one would notice anyway.
If they did, would they care?
Would they cry, wonder why
Or just move on with their lives?
I don't think I can hold on any longer
It seems like everything around me is falling apart.
Nothing seems right anymore.
Why don't I just slit my wrists and die?
I wonder why I even try.
When all I ever do is cry.
I'm gonna do it this time.
Goodbye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Effective ending, and very good poem. The emotions are greatly described.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I don't know how u cood only have a 3.4 ratin on this poem...i gave u a 5! it was gr8! there was emotion and i can relate completely....
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew

    Kimie, I can`t tell you how upset I was to read this poem. I am hoping with all my heart that your not really thinking this way. Please remember that death is forever there is no going back or changing your mind. And the hurt and pain that you leave behind ruins everyones life that ever loved you. I hope you really think about this there is nothing that bad that tomorrow can`t fix. I do care and hope your ok.
    Drew

  • 18 years ago

    by keira

    I think that dean is so right, nothing is every that bad hunni just have faith to belive things will get betta you'll see!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    I gave this poem a 5 because it was well written - but the topic is unbelieveable. Your death would have an aftershock a ripple affecting more people than you know it would. I've taken this minute to read this peom - now you take a minute to see if you looking someone to be there for you look at me: If you wanna talk email me at deanrands@hotmail.co.uk

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