I gave this poem a 5 because it was well written - but the topic is unbelieveable. Your death would have an aftershock a ripple affecting more people than you know it would. I've taken this minute to read this peom - now you take a minute to see if you looking someone to be there for you look at me: If you wanna talk email me at deanrands@hotmail.co.uk

I think that dean is so right, nothing is every that bad hunni just have faith to belive things will get betta you'll see!

Kimie, I can`t tell you how upset I was to read this poem. I am hoping with all my heart that your not really thinking this way. Please remember that death is forever there is no going back or changing your mind. And the hurt and pain that you leave behind ruins everyones life that ever loved you. I hope you really think about this there is nothing that bad that tomorrow can`t fix. I do care and hope your ok.
Drew

I don't know how u cood only have a 3.4 ratin on this poem...i gave u a 5! it was gr8! there was emotion and i can relate completely....
~*Who Cares?*~

Effective ending, and very good poem. The emotions are greatly described.