I looove it! I already told you that, but meh. It's so... wow...
Especially loving the repeated stanza.

I think it is brilliant keep up the good work chick yr amazing!!! :) xxxjessixxx

Simply amazing once again! Sweet song! Do you have music for it? You know you should really become a singer!! You have killer songs! Or you could be a really famous poet! either way your gonna be awesome! Great write! Take care! byez!
~Luvz~
~Chica~

That was really good hunnie keeo up your talent, xoxo Rach

Wow!!! great job. you have a talent keep it up and hopefully these lyrics will be made into songs one day theyre brilliant!!
love jess XxXxXx