Comments : Dawn till Dusk

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heya man.
    Great poem if I say so myself, so discribtive.
    Your words were great. and I am sorry to say that your poems are becoming to good to even feeel worthy to comment =(

    you really expressed your feeling, how she isin your eyes which was excellent.

    It was all excellent -sigh- damn you!!

    haha...its so late xxx