You stroke my mind...

by PURE HEART   Jan 14, 2006


You came into my life just like friend,
lending me a helping hand.

One day you stroke my mind,
how can be one so gentle and kind.

Interacting with all with love and care,
which i found something very rare.

I was blown by the way you talked,
I wanted to say something but my lips were locked.

Looking at you from a distance apart,
could not resist to see u as it was so hard.

You won my heart by the polite tenderness,
as it was tough to find in some one else.

Your truth fullness and honesty captured my mind,
so many qualities how one can bind.

Now you live in my heart and captures my mind,
rules the soul and locked in my eyes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really nice idea, but there are places where you should really put some coma's to help it read easier, also...

    "Your truth fullness and honesty captured my mind,"

    Should either be "capture" or "has captured"

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, absolutly beutifully written. You have alot of talent, don't you ever lose that. Keep up the aweseome work.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey thats a sweet poem....i could smeel something in it & it seems like a great news here....hope this was no imagination.

    well nicely written once again.
    take care and all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Hi Bharti,How are you???Hope you are doing great.Sweet poem.Friendship is the base for every relationship in life.But only few people have the ability to differentiate friendship and love b'coz both carry similar feelings for one another...neway,take care and keep smiling....

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Who is this who lives in your heart and has captured your mind??hehe..

    Very heartfelt, dear... I loved reading it... shows ur depth of love...

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

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