by bOlly danCer
Wow!! this poem has soooo much passion and love in it its FANTASIC! keep it up. |
by TinyDancer46
Wow... you've got such a great way with words. I really loved how you described the feelings that you have. Great writing hun, I hope to read more of yours soon! |
Who is this who lives in your heart and has captured your mind??hehe.. |
Hi Bharti,How are you???Hope you are doing great.Sweet poem.Friendship is the base for every relationship in life.But only few people have the ability to differentiate friendship and love b'coz both carry similar feelings for one another...neway,take care and keep smiling.... |
Hey thats a sweet poem....i could smeel something in it & it seems like a great news here....hope this was no imagination. |
Wow, absolutly beutifully written. You have alot of talent, don't you ever lose that. Keep up the aweseome work. |
Really nice idea, but there are places where you should really put some coma's to help it read easier, also... |