Just a Messed up Life Part 1...

by XTaintedxBeautyX   Jan 14, 2006


Success is not a word, but a story... a story that you choose what is right from wrong, left from right... a story where there is only one winner.... yourself...

Now some people say we are living in reality, I think that isn't true. I think we are living in a dream, a dream that when you die you never end up waking up... a dream where I found you...

But then again you were just another guy, another guy who "plays the field" and breaks as many girls hearts as you can. so here i dedicate my tears to you and realize...

No guy is worth tears, or being sad over... I'm learning the hardest way... be happy for who you are and for having so many people that love you in life. be happy for living and having friends, for the good and the bad times... you will always get through if you don't put yourself down...

If you have put yourself down you will sometime realize that it wasn't worth it, you will move on... Things finally get better, then you fall in love with her, you want to marry her... I sit and wonder why?

You weren't worth it I finally realize, I try to move on... I finally move on from you and fall in love with your good friend...

There is going to be a part 2

© Corinne

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  • 18 years ago

    by hunter

    That sounds about right gurl falls for boy. boy falls for another gurl. gurl moves on, and gurl falls in love with the boys friend. or the other way around. lol. well, I hope this get better for ya and hope everything is ok. I notice that some guys have hurt you in the past. but there is always someone better out there you just got to know were to look.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow that was really good, i have to say it's one of my my favorite poems keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shakenangel

    I love the way you've written it, very different to anything I've seen before. Can't wait for part 2!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by kersh

    Me, My friend, John?
    *Cunfuzzled*
    I like it, you understand now. Good.

  • 18 years ago

    by xmedicatexmex

    That's really good and powerful, I like your style of writing. It's almost like a story