by Simon Hayes
Hey I'll walk with you Bill... We'd have a right laugh =D |
by Melissa
Oh Bill, this is so well written and I know this feeling all too well. This one too "Time Slipping By". The only thing I can say to that is WOW, simply amazing! Awesome writing! ;o) |
by Chelsey
Bill you always write so well..SOmetimes I feel like I say just the same things to you because each poem I read is just so amazing, no matter what style or what you are writing about...I think its great when people make mistakes actually because otherwise lessons wont be learned and who knows what life would be like for that person, I am however sorry you had to go through things you had too..breaks my heart to know someone I care for had a rough life, thankfully your on the right track now..again Bill...terrfic write!! Always a fan, |
I wasn't sure if I should comment on this one... Bill, from the deepest of my heart, I wish to tell you something: Honestly, you write like an angel. The way you express your feelings through poetry's just wonderful... when people read your poetry, they become part of your life... thanks for sharing this one with all of us. Hugs my friend. |
by Loulou
Great poem |
by Ann Stareyes
Beautiful Bill....a write that hold's so much hope. |
Dang I know exactly how you feel in this poem...I think the same all the time, seems like what I am best at is making mistakes...lol Oh well, love the poem....5/5 |
by Rosie
Bill, I love every one of your poems. Each one that you write gives out so much passion and deep feelings. I love the way you write and i hope that one day i can write just like you |
Bill, I really love this write. You will never walk alone my friend! You passion for life has come out well. |
by Lu
I have walked through your love poems to your .....sadness poems to your .....poems about life .... |