by Demian Jan 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I had i dream tonight i wish that i would not end. I felt so real even though i knew it was all pretend. It was in a winter place that was so nice. I was in a castle that was made out of ice. I was dancing with the most beautiful girl i have seen all my life. She was my love and soon to be my wife. I felt like i was in a better place then heaven above. i knew i felt this way cuz i was with my one and only true love. As my dream move on it change to a dreadfull place. It change to the beach and then i saw her face. As the sun went down and the moon and star started to shine. I asked her if she would be mine. With the moon glowing on us she shed a tear. I look at hear and wisperd i love u dear. As my dream when on i knew that no longer it would last. I knew that in some time it would be part of the past. In my own world the day was coming so was the light. In my dream my love faded in that long night. When she faded i felt so sad. I felt like some thing was missing and i felt so bad. I woke up and i wish i was still in my dream. The only thing i could do is just6 cry and scream. Even though i had my baby i felt like i was missing some thing that day. In that perfect world with my baby i just wanted to stay. |
Mmm mi amor...soon my love soon |
by nadsyy
I found dis sweet hehe....n yeh heaps of emotion...love dia mwaz xoxo |
by Michelle
Wonderful... excellent poem.. keep up the good work! 5/5! |
by britt
That is such a good poem.I love it!!!!! |
by Stormy
Lots of emotion... i luv it..5/5 |