Nothing More

by myshiningstar14   Jan 14, 2006


God I'm nothing
more than what
you've made me.
Nothing more than
the tears i cry, the
laughs I bring.
Nothing more than
the prayers I pray,
the lives I touch.

God I'm nothing
more than what you
want me to be.
Nothing more than
the beat my heart
makes, the way i
breath. Nothing more
than the pages of my
life you are writing,
and nothing more than
the dreams I'm
dreaming.

God I'm nothing
more than what I'm
becoming. Nothing
more than the words
I say, the love I
portray. Nothing
more than what I
choose to be.

XXLISSA

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brieanna

    This is a really greAT poem I hope you will keep on writing them because you are awesome at it.

    Thank You

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    So true...deeep and real...wonderfully expressed

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Great Job Wow....Even withouth the rhyme you make this poem shine Greatly....Raelly Really Really Nice...my only advice try to make into like a stanza thing, some people hating readint it because they thinks its like a story, i personally think its time but there are some hardcore critiquer peaople out there. just helpin u out, great job though 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Breyon

    This poem is awesome, it seems as if you just open up your heart and lay it out all in your writing. Keep it up!

    Br0ken x iinsid3

  • 18 years ago

    by wanted dead or alive!

    Loved it!!!!!

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