Comments : StUPiD MaRcO

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Okay mamita sry for taking forever to comment on this poem....You know I really liked it, and I liked talkin to you too. I mean this poem was so beautiful...I especially liked the part:

    you said that everything was all a lie
    that you just didn't want to see me with him
    after all this crying
    in my own tears you let me swim

    and....

    marco lied because he wanted a chance
    but all he did was get a good-bye slap
    what did you expect me to do
    just give you an award and clap

    Girl you know that was hot...lolz. I really missed you mami, I am so glad that u back on here...keep writting I know that you gonna be writting alot now that u are all happy again!!!!
    Keep writting....

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Your Words Are Great, and you show detal beyond Greatness, Really Excellent Job 5/5 your added to fav's....ttyl Sometime
    PeAcE OuT
    ~The Poet~