by Angie Jan 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Mascara tears, |
by Jenni Marie
This was really moving and sad, i could feel the pain behind the words. |
by Fallen~Tears
Oh my gosh i loved the last stanza.. it really ended it well.. it was just a great ending.. another great poem.. 5/5 |
by Lexi
I really liked this poem!!! btw your really pritty i love how you did your eye make-up. |
It was well written, I felt as if something was missing though...needed a bit more substance...for me... |
Woneerfully written peice. very deep and crammed with feeling. the progresses well and holds a lot of emotion within it which is transfered to the reader very well. |