Nicely done.. its short.. but you make it work!! awesome.. like it.. gave you a five.. keep it up!
amanda

Short but good. I'm not a great fan of every word having a capital letter but that’s just me being a grammar freak lol. Good work on the punctuation and keep practice with meter. Great work though, I really enjoyed it!
lots of love, great job!!
kt

Hey this is good, sorry if its true, sounds like you put alot of emotion in it. keep up the awesome work, check out some of my poems some time ! hugs-hayley

I liked it alot though it was short. I was getting caught up in it and than it ended lol but it was good. you might want to check for misspellings in the first paragraph though. great work overall

I like it and i don't if it's short b/c hell mine are short. ahah very nice job. i felt the emotion in it. xoxo Rach

Ang,, this is amazing!! liek all your other poems!! u have a god-givin talent!!

KeEp It Up AnD sTaY sTrOnG

LoTa LoVen,,

TiFfAnI

Even though it's not one of your greatest it sounds like you put a lot of heart into.. I hope it's not true but if it is keep your head up -k-

!^I Love Being In Love^!

Awe so sweet and so simple!! I loved the ending it was breath taking!
5/5

Hey love, thanks a bunch for the comment you left me. It means a lot to me when people comment and take the comments seriously and gives thoughtful feedback. I've read a few poems of yours and I like the emotion in them. Man poems can have beautiful langauge but without the feeling the words mean very little. Your poems are beautiful and tell a lot about you as a person, holding a bit of your soul captive inside the words.

-Tainted Mikochan

This is good. Short line, Yet holds a great deal of emotion within them!
Im really liking your poems, Ima add you to my favs =] lol
Take care x-x-x
- natz

Sad poem... well written good work
i cant vote this amazing stuff anythin less than 5/5
love
amy

Sad...but good one...nice job....i really liked the way it flowed....5/5!

Woneerfully written peice. very deep and crammed with feeling. the progresses well and holds a lot of emotion within it which is transfered to the reader very well.

5/5

It was well written, I felt as if something was missing though...needed a bit more substance...for me...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I really liked this poem!!! btw your really pritty i love how you did your eye make-up.

Oh my gosh i loved the last stanza.. it really ended it well.. it was just a great ending.. another great poem.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen!~*

This was really moving and sad, i could feel the pain behind the words.