Hey This is a great poem, really good 5/5 and all my only advice make it longer, Not many people will comment and vote on really short poems, so to might help it out make a Goodbye Part II and make it a series, i have a couple series poems myself that ppl are lovin you should try it, but other then that, your words Perfect Rhymes Perfect its Great, Good Job 5/5 ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Your poem is very deep and I felt kinda like I was reading a letter someone wrote to me, as their final goodbye and it kinda made me sad but I liked your poem

Wow hun I know exactely how you feel!!! You did a great job and it's full of emotion

Good job.. rhythmically flowing was kinda hard to stay on but, with the words you chose you made an awsome poem!
-Rachel

Wow!! Great poem, great job, great great great..... Loved the flow of it
5/5

Veyr good poem. i really liked it, it had alot of emotion in it! great job!

It's a nice poem. I liked it....

I liked it..a lot!!! well done!!

keep writing

Lonelynow xxxxx

p.s. my poem was true, like all my poems

Another good poem! i especially like the end where you say:
So this is my goodbye,
maybe I will see you when you die.

could you mayb comment on some of mine?