Comments : Simplicity.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Beauty is all around us,
    yet we do take it for granted.
    So spare some time and just
    have a look, the is so much to be found....

    that would have to be my favorite part, just because it's so true. We have so many thing around us and we don't even realized it. I love this poem Steven, just wonderful my friend. Take care and keep it up. Hugs you tight!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    A beautiful and inspirational write......

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    A really nice poem, i liked it heaps, you made it sound like everything in the environment is sooo peaceful ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This completely indescribable masterpiece is a reflection of its title. It paints such a lovely image of the place I would rather be right now. Such a profoundly beautiful poem!! I give you ten thumbs up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Steven,

    An impressive poem about an excellent topic. The title is also very appropriate and the ideas you developed are full of beauty.
    Bravo!

    Beauty is all around us,
    yet we do take it for granted.
    So spare some time and just
    have a look, the is so much to be found

    Excellent words you penned my friend.

    HansRik