Revealed secrets part 2

by aloneforgotten13   Jan 15, 2006


Revealed was all my pain revealed was the terrible deed
revealed was the secret of my life that was so perfectly hidden reveled and every one knows
so what do i do?
i turn run hide until a voice in the dark helps me to find a way to the light.....
this is only part 2

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    They way that you express yourself is so amazing. this is an excellent part 2.
    luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by Destiny

    I WANT TO SEE 3~!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I love the fast pace and it goes with the first part so well. i love the flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Not bad, just a little short and there are no stanzas so i got lost in the writing. Without the breaks i love track @_@. Anyway good job. Keep up the writing.

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