Comments : Revealed secrets part 2

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Not bad, just a little short and there are no stanzas so i got lost in the writing. Without the breaks i love track @_@. Anyway good job. Keep up the writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I love the fast pace and it goes with the first part so well. i love the flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Destiny

    I WANT TO SEE 3~!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    They way that you express yourself is so amazing. this is an excellent part 2.
    luv em