by Kurt
Not bad, just a little short and there are no stanzas so i got lost in the writing. Without the breaks i love track @_@. Anyway good job. Keep up the writing. |
by aaron c s
I love the fast pace and it goes with the first part so well. i love the flow. |
by Destiny
I WANT TO SEE 3~!!!! |
by *~Emma~*
They way that you express yourself is so amazing. this is an excellent part 2. |