by ---AL--- Jan 15, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The Rhyme scheme and syllable count have important meaning in this poem... It's not written clunky by accident. |
I completly understand your poem and I do think this new thing was good. I gave it a 5. It flowed great and was really well written. |
by Kayla
Wow. It's such a great poem. I absolutely loved it! 5/5 You have a lot of talent! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! |
by Polly
Hey, yeah i think i get it. it's a really good poem and i had to read it a few times to get the meaning, but i really like it |
by Kate
Hey Al! |