I grow weak

by gasping for air   Jan 15, 2006


I feel bare
I feel weak
My emotions run rampant
My soul grows tired
Tears fall
Limbs ache
Eyes grow heavy
And I wish to sleep
Sleep the eternal sleep
My body keeps going
Yet my mind reccedes
Energy is lost
Soul weeps
Spirit is gone
But for now
I am here

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  • 18 years ago

    by *theloved1*

    I love this poem*its really good*i like how you say*-but for now i am here-*that's kind of how i feel sometimes and its like-maybe i can get through it*yeah* much luv~liz

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Koool amanda wait to go, keep writting, xoox Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    Yeh gr8 job ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    Yeh gr8 job ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgi

    I rly like this, its good work, well done! I like the last two lines, its like your dealing with all ur emotion and saying tht u can cope thru it. I hope tht ur alright! remember tht i have an email www.mental-wellbeing.co.uk for advice 24/7
    good poem well done

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