WOW.
AMAZING.
Really.....

I love this..its so *snappity snap snap*
lol!! REAL poetic!!!!

Great poem, short, precise and the best part. The reader still feels a sense of completion. Great job.

That was really cute. nice and sweet. xoxo Rach

I rly like this, its good work, well done! I like the last two lines, its like your dealing with all ur emotion and saying tht u can cope thru it. I hope tht ur alright! remember tht i have an email www.mental-wellbeing.co.uk for advice 24/7
good poem well done

Yeh gr8 job ;)

Yeh gr8 job ;)

Koool amanda wait to go, keep writting, xoox Rach

I love this poem*its really good*i like how you say*-but for now i am here-*that's kind of how i feel sometimes and its like-maybe i can get through it*yeah* much luv~liz