Comments : I lost you so everyone has to loose me

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Holy crap girl.. thats pretty strong writing youve got there.. i hope that you wrote this on a whim and you arent considering doing this to yourself... but ive been in that mode of thinking.. so i get where it comes from and how someone is when they feel like that... it sucks..
    keep up the great writing.. gave you a five
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by franky

    THAT WAS A GOOD POEM BETTER THEN ANY OF MINE FRANK AKA FRANKY