Its good, alot of really raw emotion, i like it. plus its also how i feel latly

It was a good poem over all, just some punctiation that's it ; )

Good work though.

Really good and makes me quite angry. I wish that more people could look past what they see and realize that the true attractiveness of a person comes from within.

Wow - such emotion but so sad - trust me whether you're fat or not shouldnt be an issue - it may be because of your age and people pick out pathetic things like that but it does get better. keep writing!!! =) 5/5 =)