Keep those broken pieces in place n let time heal them.
Beautiful n heartfelt poem.

Wecome back Champ!

Kumar, This is indeed a deep sad heartfelt write filled with longing and emotions.

Heartbreak is something whichg takes so painfully long to heal and for the pain to go away. This is portrayed so well in your write my friend.

Best regards,

Steve

Awww hi dear. remember me? it's been so long. i'm sorry i haven't been able to comeon here so often. i always forget or i never have time. i'm a busy lady nowadays. i saw you had a new poem and i had to comemnt. i miss you but you still write so lovely and fluidly. i love your poems. keep it up my dear and take care. i have an email still, and i check it often. so we still can keep in touch.
love you:)
-Britt

=( awww this poem really really touched my heart. its sooo powerful and meaningful. lets just say dat i have experinced this in my life time. so i know what it means. it is somewhat like my love story. it's hard when u love someone and give them ur heart, and later u find out, there still in love with someome else, and they shove back ur heart in little pieces. the pieces are like shards of glass. u have to pick up each piece with care other wise u will b pricked. but u c an nevee pick up every piece. it's hard, but i have moved on. i am now just waiting out my life looking 4 that right one.

but yes, gud poem, very heart feeling. filled with memories of happiness and gloom. 5/5

You still have it kumar ...touching poem

Hi Kumar

this is awesome. i m short of words (as usual). a lot many people can feel this pain but you hav written this pain in ur own words.
excellent.
all d very best

take care
Bharti

Excellent poem! It's actually really nice to get a guys perspective on the crazy thing, call love! Keep ya head up x

I made the wrong choice,for love should be seen with open eyes,
i turned blind to it and now in life "With Broken Pieces I Realize.".

Great lines!!! I really loved this poem. I can relate to it. You have alot of talent in you. Keep it up. 5/5 :-)

Great poem.

Ohhhh wow this poems awsum......i felt the pain in every corner of my heart......well done i enjoy reading ur poems........great riter for a great read.
5/5

sonam

This is so tragic, yet so bautifully woven. i really like the way you have ended the poem.

take care and good luck.

Excellent job. :] Thank you for your support and encouragement throughout the past months. Though I don't always show it, your comments mean a great deal to me. I pray you're doing well. :] Please take care. 5/5.

Where hav u gone dear????? i m waiting 4 ur new poems....

hope to see u back soon dear

take care
Bharti

Kumar....
my friend, it has been a while since the last time I read a poem of you. Just wish to tell you that I love every little bit of this one. I truly hope you write another one soon, your poetry makes others happy. Take care and know that I care for you. Hugs my friend.

Beautifully written als0 darl. a very p0werful and t0uching piece. u have such a way with w0rds. great j0b. keep it up!! =)

l0ve always d0ra

Great poem.I could visualize the whole scene.5