by Laura Ash
Great poem! 5/5 I never read anything like it! ( I mean that in a good way) |
by Ladida
This is really pretty! I love all the symbolism that you used in it. Another different poem for you and it's still awesome. You have so much talent! |
by dora
Beautifully written. a tuching piece 0nce agian! amazing j0b |
This poem is amazing! i really like it |
by Raquel
Wow thats a great poem, it flows really well. |
by Bill Turner
Passionate, sad and driven, all at once. Heartfelt and free...a wonderful concoction of emotion and images. I love it. |
by Macy
Wow terrific poem. your an extremely talented writer!! |
by yaRis
Hey chula wa up? long time no talk... i hope que estas bien and dat u haden't forgot me lol... n e ways nice poem gurl i liked it then again i love all ur work imma go read more eventually okay so 5/5 stay sweet ciao chula.... |
by cLumsy
Damn. such a sensual poem! i can visually see everything.. keep up the great work. and sorry i haven't been commenting much. i'll try and keep up. 5/5 |
by Sonny
I love this poem. This is one of my favorite poems by you and it has a lot of meaning to it. It explains alot about being unloved and used by other people. |
This is such a sweet piece. i'm still a little confused as to what it means tho. like, what does the white rose symbolize... besides ur skin? i really luv it though. u should get this published. there seems like there is a deep hidden meaning but i just can't figure it out. i luv it! |
by Dark Secrets
Awww, that's soo sweet, I like the way the tittle goes through the whole poem... nice! |
by Unknown
That was beautiful :) woww |