Comments : To the homeland we salute, on the battlefield we shall die

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Hmm. i felt this was a god piece of writing and the words were creative, but i do think there was something missing. i also thought that the story got a tad lost, but hey, what do i know. if you read my poems you'll find that i don't have a clue what i'm talking about.

    Brad