Wow, powerful poem and nice use of words. Big words...lol. Great job

You have a very strong rhyme scheme in this poem, and it worked really well. The only real problem is for me the last stanza did not keep in with the flow of the rest of the poem. I felt my first hesitation reading the first line of the last stanza. The first stanza is my favourite, not sure why, it just stuck in my mind. Well done, keep it up.

Thanks for the comment you left on my poem "Musings of you." I have sent you a message thanking you in more detail, I hope you don't mind.

Silver

The Last stanza has remain in my mind with much visionary passion. I love your ability to adapt into different styles of writing you handle it so gracefully.

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Hayley

Wow... this is an incredible poem! The rhyming pattern never got choppy and it stayed really smooth, and the way you used your words were brilliant. Great writing once again, keep up the amazing work!

I love all your poems they have so much meaning which i think every poem should have thank you for your comment it made me smile

love always tabby