Good poem 5/5

Thats really good. 5/5

I like your conversational style, here, and then the way it picks up tempo and rhyme as you become more distraught within the poem. Nice one. Missing someone's a real pisser, isn't it.

This poem was hard for me to read at first... then i tried singing it.
(yeah, weird, i know).
but as a song, this poem really touched me. great write.

a.a.o xxx

Great job!!!!!