Wow this is really good i love it 5~5

Thats really kewl!!

I like it too so visual
You had flow with it as well
fabulous work
Em

Great concept and really written well

5/5

Wow 5 very helpful comments
Thankkkk you!
I shall comment on your work now
xlestatx

Wow 5 very helpful comments
Thankkkk you!
I shall comment on your work now
xlestatx

Oh for.. why did that post twice

Excellent you are talented. I can't believe your only 15. Keep doin what your doin.

That is AMAZING!! ur so talented!!!
well done thanku 4 my comment!!!
DIE CHAVS! lol
hayley
xxx
5/5

O.O O M G!!! That was ......woww!!! I can soooo relate! amazing! *hug for no reason* I think I love you! lol jk 100000000000/5

Wow

Lissa

Wow that is beautiful... Very emitional... I love it-Midnight

Same here..i think the same way..keep your chinm up my vmapire dude!

Short - and with power. Very emotional . . . I really felt your poem.

Peace. [Sole]

I love this poem....keep it up!

Aye dis is good...i enjoyed reading...love dia mwaz xoxo

Wow!!! thats so cool lol
5/5
i loved that its so funkey lol
i loved it so fuking much ehhe
xoxroxyxox

Really love this poem it's really good
lv claire
xxxxx

....Something pretty good. Not impressive yet it had been really good. The words flowed together yet near the end there did sound a slight problem with the flow. Overall a good job what with the imagery and well just the words as well.
~Faith-less