Comments : I'm Trying

  • 18 years ago

    by waking up inside

    I love it.. it fits my life.. haha.. most of these poems do

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow! excellent poem 5/5 xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Thank you guys, I've read your poems and I really like them too! :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I really liked the message your trying to get across here, the hope that you can come out of it all ok in the end, but retaining the need to be independant, not to have people controlling you. I hope that you can find the strength within yourself to overcome your problems. Keep trying, it's all any of us can do.
    Great Write
    *VioletRaven*