Comments : I want

  • It sucked

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow ok...it didnt suck, anything but that. Dont listen to them it was wonderful and I want you to keep up the amazing work. Good job 5/5

    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Ah that r0se kid d0esnt kn0w what his/shes talking ab0ut. i th0ught this was really g0od. turned 0ut great. beautifully written! and n0 pr0bz f0r letting ya use it ;o) keep up the amazing w0rk!!!

    l0ve always d0ra
    *-x00o00x-*

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    Really liked it hun ignore the idiot who asnt gt d balls 2 even say y it sucked!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I really liked the concept of this poem alot. Taking someone's poem for some help which was alright and then twisting some into your own words and it comes out as an amazing poem. Very good. keep it up. keep on writing. hopefully your baby reads it because i know i want someone to show me a poem written to me. :) . love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Loved it! thats kinda how i've felt at times....sighs awsome write keep it up and yea if ur gonna say a poem sucked atleast give a reason as to y u think that

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohhh this is such a beautiful poem! You and Dora both are amazing... jeez... I get inspired just from reading both of your work. I had to laugh when I read that rose guy's comment, because his poems are the definition of suck. =) Yours are amazing, so don't let that get in your way, and keep up the awesome writing hun! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    It wasn't a great poem . . . it was amazing ;) So much meaning behind the words and it painted a beautiful image in my mind. Keep it up xD

    Peace. [Sole]