Falling asleep

by waking up inside   Jan 15, 2006


Shes holding an empty bottle.
his heart's beating full throttle
tears begin to stain his cheek.
as he sees shes getting weak.
He whispers something in her ear,
losing her now is his biggest fear,
there in the dark she's lying
he just wants to Save her,
He knows that she's dying.
with one last breath,
she closed her eyes,
she just wanted to fall asleep
tonight.©

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    Good job very emontional...i can relate to that.....

  • 18 years ago

    by daniellee

    Hiii yaa i changed that poem cause it was a bit too personal lolz;,
    check itt outt its way better now i think,

  • 18 years ago

    by daniellee

    Thnx for yourr comment = )

  • 18 years ago

    by daniellee

    Omfg, that poem was really good
    i liked itt alott ya check my poems,
    they arntt as good butt i only just started, butt good job =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Good poem

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