The Angel that saved me (part 1)

I know it's kinda long but i love to hear what you all think it's not done tho this is only part one.
P.S not sure where in belongs so if you have an idea let me know

A heart so alone, a girl so down, had
Nothing to hope for nothing, to look
Forward to,

She longed for a friend to help her
In need, she longed for someone to
Hear her screams,

She wish some one would see the
Pain she Carries inside her eyes, and
The hurt she held so deep inside.

She prays night after night to
God above to send her, her own
Angel, her own sweet love.

She wished so hard and cried so much
For one single person to show they care,
So she could stop wishing she was no longer here.

She fought so hard to forget
Her deep Thoughts and her
Visions of someday dying.

She never thought her life would
Come to this, she never thought it
Would turn out this way

When she thought death would be
Better then living another day.

She was slowly losing her self,
Losing her faith; she didn't think
She could make it any more.

She hurt so much, her heart was broken
In two, she had no one there to talk to,
And didn't know who she could trust,

She was so sick of crying her
Eyes out every Night, crying
Till she fell asleep,

But her thoughts followed her into
Her dreams and after a while
She could no longer sleep.

She didn't know what to do, She just wanted
It all to stop, She prayed one last prayer, and left it all be,
Then that night she met the person who would
Would turn that girl into me.

© written by FireXfly

poets note: the girl i was talking about as "she" that meaning me and the ending might be a lil strange but it means how i changed so much and have. and how i am becoming the person i wanna be and longed so long to be. i hope you like i'll be sure to return any comments left. thanks sooo much