Short but good!! nice work!

Another powerful write. Great Job.
I really like this one it is a fav of mine out of your poems. Ilikethis writing style that you used as well as starting each paragraph with night after night/day after day....that is a very tough style to write and have great flow...
The only thing is the last line:
I only wish he could see that I have given him the best of me.

Would have also been nice in this format:

I only wish he could see
that I have given him the best of me.

If you had kept it like that the flow would havebeen undisturbed.

But hey that is just my opinion you are the creater and artist and I think you wrote this flawlessly....again I really enjoyed reading it.