by Natalie84
Wow...I can't believe no one has commented on this! This is amazing! I feeling I think many can relate to. It saddens me a bit to read this as I know it's REAL for so many. I surely hope you don't feel this way as that would be such a shame. You described this feeling perfectly...the poem flowed so well...awesome write!! :) |
Oh My Gosh that was great - you're right perfect isnt real but this poem sure came close 5/5 =) |
by The Wingless
WOW. I love the rhyming sheme. I love the title, I love the poem. I was blown away by the first line. Keep up the good work. |
Hmm interesting idea.. i like yor style of writing... perfection is something so many people seem to strive for, loosing themselves in the process. |
by NannO
WOW.. this is gr8.. u had perfect flow (and thats real, by the way :P) gr8 job with teh clone and evrything.. u set forth a very clever idea.. and u wrote about it beautifully in a tone evry1 wud understand.. just kinda like breakin it to them, that perfect reli isnt real.. u had gr8 rhyme and the content is very truthful and honest... simple yet meaningful.. |