Morning Breeze

by cai   Jan 16, 2006


As the morning breeze blows
As the fresh water in the river flows
The clouds slowly moving beneath the sky
And the beautiful flowers are starting to cry

A new day has come
With a new challenge to overcome
And the angels has flown away
To guide and protect you in your way

And I'm here to guard you as you go
I'm here with you to fight your foe
To share with you my beautiful morning
To share with you my sweetest feeling

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  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That's another very interesting and beautiful poem...but in your second stanza third sentence you put

    "And the Angels has flown away"
    The grammer sounds off. It would be better
    "and the angel has flow away"
    or "And the angels have flow away"
    Other than that, the poem is perfect. hope to read more.

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Wow thats awesum..ur gunna get heaps far in poetry i can see it already...hope ya like it here..its pretty awesum...if ya wish to read sum of my poems

    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by cai

    Thanks 4 ur comment... i'll do my best to make it better...XD

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