Hey, I really liked it. Your poems are always filled with such great emotions, and hats off to you on that. Emotions are pretty much impossible to put into words, so to do it so well and make it look so easy is really great. My two cents on this poem though, is simply that overall, it was really great. I just... Well feel free to disregard this - especially being as it's not my poem, and a writer should write only to impress themself- I just didn't think the ending was necissary. The 'no I'm not yelling' sentence seems .. Well actually I'm not sure, it just seems to stop the flow of emotions all of a sudden. I guess I can't explain exactly what I'm thinking, so perhaps I'm wrong and the lines do make sense lol. I don't know, but I thought i'd give my opinion anyway. Please don't take it offensively... Anyway, I love all the emotions you put into your poem and how easy it is to really feel the words being said. You're a truly talented writer.