I like the rhyme on this-almost playful, almost childlike in it's innocence and sincerity(meaning the choice of words you use to rhyme)-yet it holds a hint of eroticism.It is obvious it commemorates a special night of love and romance-it has a magical, romantic, and wistful nostalgic feel to it.Great poem.

Twas a night when we both felt like teenagers, living and learning for the first time ... so nice pick up on the childlke innocence. I enjoy your comments.