Feeling

by jade   Jan 16, 2006


Why do i feel like crying
why does this make me sad
why does this make me crazy
why does this get me mad
why cant i just feel sane
why is nothing bared but pain
why do you make me feel this way
why say the things you said
my mind is filled with anger
my hearts filled with regret
though of you i cant stop thinking
hoping things will change
you never used to be this way
yet somethings turned it strange
now we seem so distant
from the feeling that we shared
to each other we're now hostile
our judgments been impaired
i cant take much more of this
one can only cry so much
our love has been misplaced
the feelings out of touch
I'm going to stop running
I'm feeling filled with death
death of old beginnings
birth of our new end

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I think it has a good flow to it and you got your feelings across very vividly, and actually I don't think that the grammar is all that bad, really, it's just a few spelling mistakes here and there and a few places where there aren't any apostrophes, yet there should be (like 'cant'). And capitalize. But I can tell that you wrote it in a rush because it is so heartfelt and honest. That's why I like it. But it's good to just go over it a few times to it looks better and easier to read. But Good job none the less. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by jade

    Thanx heaps

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I liked it but thought there were a few mistakes. Keep up the good work though. *4/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by jade

    Thanx guys

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    The flow was a little unsteady and the rhyming was kinda cliched but it was still very good....4/5

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