by deathofme Jan 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
In a perfect town, in a perfect world. |
by Alyssa
I agree with what she said above it could have used a better ending but other then that it was really good keep it up. |
by Allison
I liked it though I think it could use a better ending. Other then that I thought that it was really good. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems if you have the chance. *5/5* |