Beautiful poem my friend. A captivating picture you have painted here with your words. Well done.

Man, that's sweet. I love it soooooo much. While reading it, I was just picturing the whole thing happening. Great poem, I truly enjoy it. Great and wonderful writing. Take care.

Sweet poem very deep. i have to say not many guys are that good at talking about the feeling let alone writing and you did an amazing job keep up teh great work 5.5

Beautifully done my friend....soulful and passionate.

That was so...wicked good!
I need to read it again
5/5!

It's good, i like the image it gives off.
later, lin

5/5.. great job, this poem is beautiful. i love it, && i can really relate to it.

I liked it, its really good.