TIMES

by tony   Jan 16, 2006


Times get rough times are hard times thats why I wish had a girl just to hold and tell her I love her or even sweet talk with her and from time to time share a kiss with her. Show her how much I care by surprising her and showering her with gifts. Show up to her door and say things that can even make me cry things so sweet that will bring weakness to her and make her brake down and cry show the same emotions. When I look at you hurts me so much just to know I have to let you go and it kills me knowing that I can't be with you. Only because my heart was set on you

please comment and tell me what you think cause i really wanna know if i need to work on my writing skills thank you and please comment

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sango

    Hmm... This one is quite interesting, I don't quite understand the flow to this one but, it's pretty good i suppose

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aye i lyked dis it was so sweet....good job...love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowDemon RogueDoll

    Ohh you made mi cry!! i love it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany Danielle Allen

    Excellent job 5/5.. i think you left out some words but other then that its a great poem keep up the good work.. Thanks for your comment on my poem...

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