by tony Jan 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Times get rough times are hard times thats why I wish had a girl just to hold and tell her I love her or even sweet talk with her and from time to time share a kiss with her. Show her how much I care by surprising her and showering her with gifts. Show up to her door and say things that can even make me cry things so sweet that will bring weakness to her and make her brake down and cry show the same emotions. When I look at you hurts me so much just to know I have to let you go and it kills me knowing that I can't be with you. Only because my heart was set on you |
by Sango
Hmm... This one is quite interesting, I don't quite understand the flow to this one but, it's pretty good i suppose |
by nadsyy
Aye i lyked dis it was so sweet....good job...love dia mwaz xoxo |
Ohh you made mi cry!! i love it... |
Excellent job 5/5.. i think you left out some words but other then that its a great poem keep up the good work.. Thanks for your comment on my poem... |