Excellent job 5/5.. i think you left out some words but other then that its a great poem keep up the good work.. Thanks for your comment on my poem...

Ohh you made mi cry!! i love it...

Aye i lyked dis it was so sweet....good job...love dia mwaz xoxo

Hmm... This one is quite interesting, I don't quite understand the flow to this one but, it's pretty good i suppose