That was beautiful *5/5*

This literally made me start to cry... its so sad when a loved one dies... =( I hope this story isn't true... keep up the fantastic writing though hun, cause you've got tons of talent!

AWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO GOOD I REALLY LOVED IT THANKS FOR THE COMMENT IT MADE ME CRY I LOVED IT!!!!!!

Wow, you made me have tears on dat poem. What a wonderful poem you wrote.. So lovely, so hearty.. Wow 5/5 on dat! I loved it.. Keep writing.. So good!!

That GREAT!!! OMG soooo sad...made me start to cry..your a good writer keep up the good work hunnie...if you need to talk imhere dont forget that..thanks for commenting on my poem!!! xoxo nelle

This is a great poem very well written..sad...but very good...keep it up
can't wait to to read more from you ;)
xoxo5/5

Wow thats beautiful, u have got so much talent, 5/5

@my

Oh my!!! i cant believe.. um,, that made me cry,, im,,, um speechless,, i think there must be a new word invented to describe ur poem,, coz no english word can,, 5/5
lots of lovin,,
**doz an1c me**

"he woke to a nightmare"

well exicuted. deep and sad poem, keep up the great work