Hope the answer be love

by premnath   Jan 16, 2006


I think I lost my life
When I am losing you
When I come for your love
Your words told, you feel the same

You give me hope
And made my dreams real
When there is pain in me
Your love set me free

Without you in my life
I lead a life in knife
Now I am in confusion
Which makes me to termination?

Yes I think it lies in your hands now
And I hope your answer to be love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real you’ll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

    Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotion’s. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

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