The Torment and Hurt Part I

by The Poetic Child   Jan 16, 2006


The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I Didn't mean what i said
i would never give her that pain
You know i love her to much
but the more i say....the more hate she gain

I wouldn't throw it away like that
I'm human i can make a mistake
But i said I'm sorry many times
My Apology i hope she can take

The Torment and Hurt
The pain i just got
The pain of your hurt
The pain i was shot

She Lost Control
She soon became Mad
Voice becoming Stressful
I just did something bad

But it was a mistake
i didn't mean what i said
but she just said whatever shut up
my words she never read

she didn't care what i said
she just couldn't take it
she hung up the phone
My heart Became Weak, i wasn't gonna make it

The torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The pain of your hurt
The pain i was shot

I took up my Breathe
took the strength to redial
she answered and Said What
just took me in denial

I tried to explain calmly
But she just still was upset
I wanted her to know i love her
Its something she cant forget

i got tired and left it
and took out a knife
she doesn't want to talk to me
so now i can end my life

she was my reason for living
so now i have no use
she took my heart and ripped it
my heart became abused....

The Torment and Hurt
The pain i just got
The pain of your hurt
The pain......I was Shot.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    ....................great...great...great...EXCELLENT Just like all your other poems, i absolutely
    love this one as well...its sad and radiates feeling...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Wow! that blew me away! i am not even here anymore! You wre right, i should have read the first ones, to understand!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I loved how your repeated the same lines after your verses. Very well written, nto what i expected btu certaintly better. Keep writn'..ur good.

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow!! This is really different from your other poems.. It shows a different side of you.. Great job.. This is full of emotion and it sounds like you really put your heart into it.. 5/5 Talk to you later Lots of love Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    This is really good