This is really good

Wow!! This is really different from your other poems.. It shows a different side of you.. Great job.. This is full of emotion and it sounds like you really put your heart into it.. 5/5 Talk to you later Lots of love Ashley

I loved how your repeated the same lines after your verses. Very well written, nto what i expected btu certaintly better. Keep writn'..ur good.

LISSA

Wow! that blew me away! i am not even here anymore! You wre right, i should have read the first ones, to understand!

....................great...great...great...EXCELLENT Just like all your other poems, i absolutely
love this one as well...its sad and radiates feeling...
~Sandra~