Love me

by midnight♥lullibys   Jan 16, 2006


Remember when you loved me
Remember when you cared
Remember when you'd hold me
And how you said to not be scared

Well Hun I'm scared for US
Will we ever be the same?
Will you still love me regardless
Of all my recent shame?

I miss you more then you know
And I wish my parents could see
The reason i feel so hollow
Is because they won't let us be

Remember when you loved me
Remember when you cared
Remember when you'd hold me
And how you said to not be scared?

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Ok i think you give yourself too much credit too...haha whatever erica

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hey there, "You're a winner!" Lol.

    this is fantastic!! i knew i wouldn't be dissapointed. i especially loved how you repeated the first stanza. terrific.

    rock on, Suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Great poem..i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Part 2 and 3 of lovers car crash is out chk them out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing stuff here. Let me guess on this of how i thought this poem was placed up. Your parents didn't want you to be with him and all of a sudden he just left you out in the dust. Maybe i'm wrong on that but that's how i am thinking of it. I really enjoyed reading this. Gave an awesome question of how the one you love tell you not to be scared. But in reality in your mind you were. again amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. I really hope i made sence there. love always and forever.

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