Very good 5`5

Wow this is amazing... i loved the way you wrote it... nice job most definetly a five out of five.. keep it up

sammie

Amazing stuff here. Let me guess on this of how i thought this poem was placed up. Your parents didn't want you to be with him and all of a sudden he just left you out in the dust. Maybe i'm wrong on that but that's how i am thinking of it. I really enjoyed reading this. Gave an awesome question of how the one you love tell you not to be scared. But in reality in your mind you were. again amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. I really hope i made sence there. love always and forever.

Part 2 and 3 of lovers car crash is out chk them out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great poem..i loved it

Hey there, "You're a winner!" Lol.

this is fantastic!! i knew i wouldn't be dissapointed. i especially loved how you repeated the first stanza. terrific.

rock on, Suzie

Ok i think you give yourself too much credit too...haha whatever erica