Very sad. You expressed your emotions well, I thought it was a pretty good poem. The only thing I would suggest is to check your spelling in certain places (hate to be a nag), I think you used "know" when you meant "now". Either way, very nice.
Take care,
~Jaime

Very nice, the way u express ur emotions, im in similar situation atm i think.. read my poems and see ^^

Wow...u go girl tell him girl! if sum1 breaks ur heart neva b afriad of lettin them knw how much they hurt you. this poem jus explain every bit of pain us girls feel wen were dumped by ppl who we thort wud love us 4eva. this poem is wonderfull. 5/5.

take care.
sonam

You may think i'm one of the most talented writers, but you my friend are the best writer hands down, that was an amazing poem! 5/5

One of the btter love poems I have heard

Great poem. great rhythm. great choice of words. the only advice i have for u is to add some punctuation. it lets the reader know when to pause and such. good job. 5/5

Very nice... i loved how you wrote this because i went through the same thing not to long ago... very nice write... definetly deserves a five out of five.. keep it up

sammie

I absolutely love this poem. I'm going through almost the exactly same thing ts horrible. stay strong hun byez x0x0

Corinne

This poem really touched ma heart, this is amazing.. write more 5/5 4 sure

Aww, so sad!!!! hun, no guy is worth it. remember, if he rejected you, HE'S not worth it. idk, maybe i feel this way b/c i've never had a bf, but don't let him ruin your life.

Thats gr8 hun a lot of emotion went into it well done x

This is a very good poem...I can really relate to it! 5/5

That was awsome. *5/5*

That is sadified, good job all about the emotion :D

Wow i like it great job

tabby

Good job you are talented keep it up

Dang i really liked it cause i'm going through this right now .. You've done it again...

I looovvveee your poems and especially your quotes and especially this poem. it is a really special poem. keep up the work. don't worry about the crush thing, my friend has that same problem too. her crush has a girlfriend and she likes him. he also likes her too but he is not choosing his girlfriend or her. smiles.

adeline

I likeit, its how i feel and hav felt for So long! and im sure ull either get ova ur crush or get bac 2getha, if its ment to b then im sure fate will find a way!